save me! save me! save me!
and i woke up fearly,
what i saw was barot in my dreams,
and now i say "stop smiling and looking my way"
i cannot close my eyes,
as he shivers me in my dreams.
i cannot even open my eyes to a new day,
coz its a new fight, and i am not a spartan.
get out of my mind!
you dont owe it.
get out of my life!
coz you ruined my life and you make me see hell on earth.
my mind has left giving thoughts,
you have made it a "MAJUR",
its not doing anything new,
as u are always standing my way.
i should not respect you,
i really should not respect you,
coz all it does to mind is,
TORTURE! TORTURE! AND TORTURE!!!!
MAJUR is perfect word
ReplyDeleteIts awesome dear....
ReplyDeleteEdit d words dat is 'fear'.
V dnt fear him....v r tortured vry badly.Hum clg aye te insaan ban kar bt nikalege gadhe bankar...as v carry his useless load...
take the above written into considerations and edit the poem...
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